User blog comment:VuLinhAssassin/Some plot twists for To Love-Ru/@comment-7948498-20150430030613

No disrespect, but plot twists are things that a writer really has to be careful with. One wrong one can really change the story for the worse. Some might find that a plot twist can make a lot of sense given the context, while others might think that it was just included for shock value or wham effect, or some kind of cheap gimmick to make the story suddenly feel awesome.

And as for Rito's revelation that he is half Charmian, despite your evidence, it still feels out of nowhere and changes the reader's perspective of the character far too much. The same goes for Rito becoming an all-powerful ass-kicking fighter. And here's a popular one. The revelation that Mikan is not related to Rito. The shippers will never give up on that one.